A.23 Jailbreaker (Production part 3)

I redesigned where the hinges on the phone would fall in order to create this new style of opening.

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This is much more appropriate because it provides me with a number of surfaces and levels to work on. Thinking of the phone as a canvas, I also have more of a square area to work on than the awkward long shape I had before.

This is the phone filled with my animations from before, plus a few new parts in response to the feedback I received last week. I returned to Nick for an update, his feedback is below.

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Feedback

1. Colours
The colours are more coherent as a scheme but they still communicate fun and appear too childish.

2. Context
The skateboard works much better than a lot of the abstract shapes. It feels like a lot of them are just there for filler.

3. Complexity
This gif is a lot more complex than the others you have made. You need to tone it back so that it fits in with the rest of the line up.

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Author: Pip Williamson

Pip // Animator & Motion Designer

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